Our Reports on Edanna

Over the last few days we’ve been working really hard on planning, drafting and publishing our own reports about the fantasy land of Edanna. Year 6 have been working hard to make sure they’ve written in the correct ‘style’, included suitable feautures (like diagrams, subheadings and captions) and used a good range of punctuation. I’ve added Mitchell’s and Sophie’s reports for you to have a look at (click for a closer look). Please let us know what you think!

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  1. Sophie says:

    Well Done Mitchell
    Here are my two stars and a wish
    *I like the way you have done a bold title and a question
    *I like the way you have done a glossary it makes it look like a real report
    WISH: Try and put some more writing in your paragraphs

  2. Mitchell says:

    Well done Sophie a lovely piece of work, here are 2 stars and a wish:

    *Im liking the level 5 punctuation like ( ) : ; – and much more
    *Nice BOLD titles
    Wish: Use a ‘Choice Question’

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