The Unique Mission Into Space

3, 2, 1. YES! We are just inside the Earth`s atmosphere, Houston. WOW! The beauty of Earth is mind-blowing my bulging eyes. It looks up side down. Beyond belief I was looking at Mars (not the chocolate).In addition, I was floating uncontrollably in the space vessel. Soon after one of my trustworthy colleagues flicked the switch and BANG! We all fell to the bottom of the vessel. Where is the pilot? “I don’t know sir. He`s not in his seat”.
“WHAT?! Who else has done a certificate for driving a space ship?” Me sir. Ok! HOUSTON we have a problem.

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4 Responses
  1. Zoe A says:

    You make it sound so real. It’s very interesting it caught my eye. You are a great writer

    Hope you write more zoltanp zoea chanteld andrews

  2. isabellam says:

    that is really good callum. l loved the detail. we felt like we were in the story

    From Isabella,Amelia, alex, Calob, and Josh!

  3. Liz Goddard (TEAM 100WC) says:

    Hi Callum,
    I really enjoyed reading this Callum. Some lovely descriptive language and I liked the way you used capital letters.
    Keep reading and writing and I hope I will get to read more of your 100 Word Challenge entries.
    Well done!

  4. Ellie W says:

    This was a very good piece of writing callum.Here are your two stars and a wish.
    *Very good use of punctuation
    *Good use of short sentences to create tention in your writing.
    WISH: Make sure your sentences make sense and check your grammar ‘The beauty of earth is mind-blowing my bulging eyes.’

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