The Orange Cat…

When I arrive home from school I always look forward to my bubbly, boiling BATH at precisely 04:57pm (which is one hour before my tea). What?! I wondered when I caught sight of an ORANGE, tabby CAT– which had MYSTERIOUS, menacing eyes – scrutinizing me. I meandered silently around the peculiar animal. The more it turned its head to stare at me, the more its eyes seemed to SEPERATE. Full of anxiety, I tiptoed through the front door. I couldn’t help but watch out the window; as much as I was terrified, I couldn’t help but be transfixed on the eyes.

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5 Responses
  1. Gemma says:

    Hi Zoe, its Gemma. You writing is really good.

  2. Rosie says:

    It is really good. Well done!

  3. Govind says:

    Well done Zoe. I like your use of -. Well done. ☺

  4. Ellie W says:

    Hi Zoe, I really like your writing, I especially love the word transfixed WOW!

  5. Alex says:

    well done

    you have used very good punctsation

    and you have put the main words in capital well done

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