The mystery box

As i woke up,a sudden thought popped into my head: ITS CHRISTMAS! How could i have forgotten? I rapidly swung open the curtains ,and there it was,the snow!But what was i doing up here ,in my room?So i sprung out of my bed and zipped downstairs towards the Christmas tree.

No one was down there,except one box in the middle of the room. It had a pink ribbon covering the box with a neatly tied bow in the middle.The mysterious thing was that there was no name tag to say who it was for or who it was from!Unless it was for me…

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  1. Thomas says:


  2. Mrs Hopkins says:

    Hi Tom
    What a strange Christmas morning!
    * – Well done for using a range of punctuation in such a short piece of work
    * – Leaving this with an ellipsis is effective too
    W – use capitals for ‘I’ – lower case looks sloppy!

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