The Mysterious Box!

Somewhere far far away from here there stood a cottage, no one ever entered or exited the residence.  I wanted to have a little peak inside however, my mom forbid it!  I really wanted to go inside but I always told myself I should definitely listen to my mom. Every day I walked passed that creepy house and nothing changed, nevertheless one day I saw a dazzling ray of light so I ran into the garden. There deposited in the long overgrown weeds was a bulky glossy black box with an appealing baby pink bow on it. Should I open it?

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  1. Amber says:

    Well done Abbie here are my two stars and a wish:

    STAR: You used different words than bright shiny

    STAR: You used ! , .

    WISH: Try to use level 5 puncuation next time.

  2. Laura Team 100WC says:

    Well done, Abbie! This is a brilliant 100 WC this week and I loved reading it. You have used a fantastic, imaginative twist on the prompt instead of just describing it, which is excellent!

    Keep up the great work!

    Laura Team 100WC

  3. Diethild Starkmeth Team - 100WC says:

    Brilliant, Abbie!
    Now I am thinking about which advice to give you about the box.
    Keep up the great work!
    Kind regards,

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