The Mysterious Box

Finally, I hadn’t slept all night and now was the time, the time to untie the florescent pink bow with my nimble fingers,it was Christmas the most wonderful time of the year, there was a chilly, icy silence in the room… I sat there perched on the edge of my seat so much anticipation has gone into one moment have I set my hopes to high after all it was just a present.But there was something mystical,mysterious,magical about this one I was sure of it, I breathed in it was so quiet you could here a pin drop. What was inside…?

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3 Responses
  1. Maisie says:

    cool work i ,like the way you thought about it

  2. Ben says:

    Sorry Joe I wonder that myself now???

  3. Joseph says:

    Great piece of writing Ben. Here are my two stars and a wish:

    *great use of adjectives
    *good use of alliteration
    WISH: use more punctuation

    However, I did wonder why you had put there was a chilly, icy silence in the room when you had said it was christmas the most wonderful time of the year?

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