The Magic Box

 

My life had totally changed since the box came. It had caused much distress to me and my family . First there was the disappearance of the grandfather clock then my mom’s  earrings and then my dad’s watch. . All of this had happened since the box came. I decided to take action, I set up a camera on the Christmas tree directly in line with the present box so I could see what was going on. The next morning  I checked the camera and saw that the box was flashing. A strange creature appeared out of the mysterious, magical  box…

 

 

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3 Responses
  1. Ariana says:

    Hello Alex, I really loved your story!!!
    You made it sound really really interesting!!! you left me trying to figure out the ending!!!!
    by Ariana:D

  2. Callum says:

    Well done Alex that was a exellant piece of work:
    *good vocabualy
    *good use of a cliff hanger
    Wish: try to use more level 5 punchtuation

    WELL DONE ALEX

  3. Mrs Stones (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Alex,
    This is a super 100 Word Challenge, well done. You have used some great vocabulary and you make the box sound really mysterious with all the strange happenings since the box arrived. It was also clever of you to write in the first person, as this makes the reader more connected to your story.
    Mrs Stones
    http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/

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