The Forbidden Garden by Abbie

Once upon a time there was a boy called Tom, his favourite thing to do was play football. Tom usually played with his friend Albert, who was a fantastic player but hated loosing. One chilly Saturday morning the boys went to South Park, the field with the proper goal posts! Unfortunately the ball jumped over the fence into a forbidding garden with a fearsome looking house. There was something in the window, looked like an upside down face, was it a man, woman or beast?  Tom gingerly knocked on the door; a cat screeched there was a clatter of movement!

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  1. Joseph says:

    Good work Abbie. Here are my stars and WISH’s:

    *Good vocabulary

    *Good punctuation

    WISH:Make sure you read the question…use the phrase’it looked upside down’…

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