The Alien on Mars

It is July 21st 2017 3:20. I was in N.A.S.A, training, and then I got told I was going to Mars! I was so excited but also nervous.  I was shocked, because I was told it would be in 27 days.

 

It is August 18th 2017. Today was the day I go to Mars, I was scared. I stepped in the rocket. Houston counted down. 5…4…3…2…1…!!!!!

 

It is November 6th 2018. We reached mars. We pondered around. After 2 hours we noticed a life source we investigated. Then we saw an Alien for some strange reason it looked upside down.

by corben shaw

Category: 100WC  Tags:
You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can skip to the end and leave a response. Pinging is currently not allowed.
One Response
  1. dylan says:

    well done corben,a very creative story and very good suspense,
    here are my 2 stars and a wish:
    *good use of …
    *you can obviously build suspense in your writing
    wish:push your self by using harder technical vocab

    but apart from that,very well done 😀 !

Leave a Reply

HTML: You may use these tags and attributes: <a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <cite> <code> <del datetime=""> <em> <i> <q cite=""> <s> <strike> <strong>

(required)

(optional)

Skip to toolbar