Mystery Box…

I saw a box lying in the middle of the room.Where did it come from?I was so tempted to open it and see what was inside, but it could be dangerous, who knew!The pink ribbon lay there untouched, as if no one knew.I didn’t know if I was scared or exited which one would it be, there was one way I could find out was opening it.The pink ribbon wrapped around the box tightly trying to say don’t open me.The temptation grew in my body I finally reached for the lid,I saw the most ugly thing gnarling at me in such a beautiful box!

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  1. Mrs Hopkins says:

    Hi Maisey
    * – I love the contrast between the beautiful wrapping and the ugly contents!
    * – The personification of the ribbon is a nice touch!
    W – remember to check your sentences read right next time

  2. Liz Goddard (TEAM 100WC) says:

    Hi Maisey,

    What an interesting post! It makes me think that the excitement of opening presents is sometimes the best part as sometimes what’s inside is not what we expect.
    Well done and Happy Christmas!

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