Moving to Mars

It is time. Antarctica is nothing. Polar bears are extinct. The o-zone layer will soon be destroyed. Moving to Mars is the only option. Scientist  have discovered the earth has only 13 days to live so we need to prepare for the longest journey humanity has ever travelled…The day is here I’ve packed my bags for Mars. I can see trillions of people making there way up to the immeasurable spaceship that will take us to our new planet that we will soon call home. I’m now boarding my flight that will take 6months…We’ve finally finished our journey and  this is a new start for all of us.

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  1. Sophie says:

    Well done Josh
    Here are my two stars and a wish:
    * I like your short sentences for suspense
    * I like how you have used your punctuation in a different style
    WISH:Try and use a bit more tricky punctuation

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