I’m A Celebrity Get Me Out Of Here

Helen Flanagan, the spray tan addict, put a lot on her wrinkled face , it made her apperance look a lot worse than it already was! Like the horrible  Eric Bristow said ‘ she is a spoilt brat , she has been and always will be one.’ For all the time she spent putting her make up on , it looked upside down anyway. She prodded her pursed, pink lips as much as nasty Eric swore! Hugo Taylor’s personality  had a  personality in common with Helen’s – they were both spoilt. How on earth were they both going to survive in this treacherous jungle?

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  1. Mrs Hopkins says:

    Hi Harriet
    This is slightly random!
    *- well done for using commas to show clauses
    *- you’ve actually used a good range of punctuation in general – keep it up!
    W – not sure this ‘flows’ as a piece of writing – try to link your ideas more

  2. Harriet says:

    Well i wanted Ashley or David to win they both deserved to win.
    By Harriet

  3. Isobel says:

    That is very wacky Harriet

  4. Faye says:

    Hi Harriet, here are Faye and Sophie’s Two slimy stars and a wish.

    * We like how you included their personality, especially Helen’s.
    *We like your punctuation.
    WISH: Try and use more sentence types.

  5. Ben says:

    Personally I dont think Eric was nasty I wanted him or David to win. 🙂

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