How To Control Cats!!!

Does your CAT cause trouble? Is your cat addicted to your BATH? Read on to find out just what cats like!

1. To start with I can tell YOU that ORANGE cats are the hardest to deal with ,so as a trained professional I tell you to stay out of it!
2. Cats are addicted to the bath, so to solve this problem you will need a spatula: this will SEPERATE them from the bath!
3. These are MYSTERIOUS creatures, donโ€™t give them sugar!
4. Make sure teachers stay away they make them angry!
Coming soon, how to train your teachers, free control glasses!

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  1. Mrs H (team 100wc) says:

    What a fun piece. I like the way it is in the form of a list of instructions and the reference to the forthcoming instructions for controlling teachers. You transmit a sense of humour very well.
    Keep up the good, imaginative writing.

    • Ellie W says:

      Thank you Mrs H, I really like doing the hundred word challenges!

  2. Rachel says:

    Wow Ellie, now i’m not a cat person bu this really good.
    *You used the 100wc words.
    *You made your instructions clear and understandable.
    WISH: Use more imperative verbs.
    TIP: Next time you do a 100wc, use more descriptive words so that you sound scientific.
    Over-all, this is a funny but amazing piece of work. Keep it up!

    • Ellie W says:

      Thank you Rachel, I’m not a cat person either so I tried to make it as funny as possible!

  3. Govind says:

    Hi Ellie. I really enjoyed reading this writing. i found it quite funny as well.

    * You have used a :
    *You have started with rhetorical questions.
    Wish: You could include brackets next time.

    Overall, this was really exciting to read and you have done a good job!! Well done. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Ellie W says:

      Thank you Govind, yes I will try and use brackets next time but I didn’t know where to put them in this piece of writing!

    • Govind says:

      Hi Ellie. You could have used them on 3. You could have said ‘Don’t give them sugar, (these are mysterious creatures!).
      Well done though! ๐Ÿ™‚ I loved reading this!

    • Ellie W says:

      Oh yes thank you Govind, I will make sure I have a look at every possible place brackets could go :)!

    • Govind says:

      No problem Ellie. Sometimes you can turn the sentence around so you can add higher level punctuation. Just remember to not always do this, you can have a variety of sentence types!

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