Happy New Year To All That Know Me

Jake
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL THAT KNOW ME
New Years Eve already, where had 2012 gone. With a blink of an eye it was almost over. It was amazing to see all over the world such laughter, joy and friendship to each and everyone. Big Ben struck. DONG, DONG, 12 times, hearing Big Ben strike that first time sent shivers down my spine. HAPPY NEW YEAR! BANG, BANG, fireworks lite up the sky, colourful, magical and even emotional. The stars above seem to disappear in the midnight sky. It was a new start for us all, what was 2013 going to bring us? maybe a win on the lottery, OH and don’t forget SATS in May!…

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  1. Ross Mannell says:

    Hello Jake,

    “New Years Eve already, where had 2012 gone?”

    This is a very good leading question with which I’m sure many will sympathise. With 2012 being an Olympics year, much had happened but I see your outlook for 2013 is positive, especially if you can win the lottery. 🙂

    Your entry is very well written as you describe the New Year’s Eve celebrations. I could imagine the sound of Big Ben being struck as the clock hit midnight then the sound of fireworks bursting over the Thames. Well done.

    @RossMannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Alex H says:

    Well done jake!
    * Nice short and snappy sentences
    *Good onomatapea
    Wish= Maybe include some simarlies/ metarphors

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