As The New Year Approached by Callum

As it approached midnight, The countdown started, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 BONG! BONG! Big Ben roared out 12 times in London. Screaming crazily, the wild crowd sang and danced to Auld Lang Syne. Still having fun, people at home made a toast to the New Year 1-1-2013.  It was a new start for all of us. Partying all night, people had lots of fun all over the world. South Korea celebrated it by doing Gangman style. Sydney doing the same as Britain by shooting fireworks up in the liquorish black sky. Dubai  putting on a fascinating firework display. The rest of the world watched on the television.

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  1. Elliot says:

    * Good vocab
    *Good puncutation
    Wish:Use more sentence types
    Overall well done 🙂

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