All Of Time And Space!

Flying and flipping, zooming and zapping…It all looked upside down! Soaring across the galaxy, from Mars to Saturn to Jupiter I could see the shimmering, shining stars skipping around to the tune of the night! As silent as an assassin, the stars -on their mission- guarded time and space. Beyond the solar system I seek to find out more…

All of a sudden, in a place far far away, all could hear silence; I knew I wasn’t alone. My heart skipped a beat. I had to get out of there quickly: I turned on the turbo booster; it didn’t work…!

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14 Responses
  1. Jen says:

    WOW! This is amazing! I love your blog. You are an amazing writer. Hey, check out my blog: http://spaceclaw.edublogs.org/ I’ll defineitly keep looking at your blog.

  2. Joshua says:

    Well done Mitchell you must have tried very hard to get onto the 100 word challenge showcase! 🙂

  3. Mitchell says:

    Im pleased with this piece of work, I think I did well.

  4. Mitchell says:

    Thanks for your comments I will try and take them on board my my next piece of work

  5. Adam says:

    Welldone here are your stars and wishes.
    star=good alliteration
    star=I liked your simile
    wish=use a ly opener

  6. lucy r says:

    Good job mitchell here are two stars and a wish

    * i like the words zooming and zaping
    * good use of punctuation like : ; ‘ , . – … .

    wish: try to use an ly word in it

    fantstic peace of work well done!

  7. Hannah Team 100WC says:

    “As silent as an assassin, the stars -on their mission- guarded time and space.” What a beautiful sentence, and what a imaginative 100WC Mitchell well done! 🙂 I really enjoyed reading it. I also liked your alliteration sentence, your story had a lovely rhythm. I look forward to reading future word challenges!

    • Mitchell says:

      Thank for spending the time to look at my work, I really appreciate it.

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