2013 is here !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3…2…1 “ yeah it’s 2013” I screamed as I slowly turned around the corner.

It was a new start for all of us. Suddenly, I jumped as I heard BANG!! CRASH!! BOOM!! But it was only the colourful fireworks exploding in the dark night sky. Then I heard wonderful music playing from giant, black speakers. As well as dancers dancing the conga. Also the bright fireworks rapidly shot up through the night sky. Some people started to even light lanterns in the sky. It seems that 2012 had gone so fast. I couldn’t believe my eyes. To friends and family and everyone I know have a happy and healthy new year.

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  1. Carol Team100WC says:

    Hello Lucy, first let me thank you for your New Year Wishes and especially the way in which you have used the 100 word challenge to share them. The opening sentence sets the scene perfectly and the use of the countdown and the word, ‘screamed’ adds emphasis and excitement to your writing. You may like to check your sentences as some of them are not complete but a little alteration of punctuation and you have a lovely piece of writing. Well done!

  2. Govind says:

    Well done Lucy! Here are your 2 stars and wish:

    *You have used some onomaterpiers
    *You have included some dialogue
    Wish: Use more of a variety of punctuation.

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