2013 is here

It was only a few minutes to go until it would be 2013. I was so excited because it was nearly a new year and a new start. We were watching Big Ben on the TV then all of a sudden it struck twelve. It was a new start for all of us. My ears were hurting after a bit from all the party poppers and after a while my Nan got a giant party popper and inside was lots of fake bits of money. BANG!!!! I jumped then we all ran outside and there were wonderful, bright colours filling the black sky it was amazing and beautiful!

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  1. Grace says:

    Well done abbie
    I like how you used action for example bang!
    I also like that u used the phrase “bright colours filling the black sky!”
    Try and use a variety of punctuation aswell though 😀

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