100wc by Mitchell H

On one wet and miserable day me and my mom went outside for our weekly running exercise (im normally a mile ahead ) but then, in the corner of my eye I saw our next door neighbors cavarvan ; I couldn’t see inside of it as the frost had smothered it all over. The next thing I knew, I saw my mom darting into the wheel, like a heavy bowling ball getting a strike and knocking every single pin down, I was too bored just to watch so I decided to go and join in, it was fun at the time, but BANG…

      To be continued

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7 Responses
  1. Jenny (Team100wc) says:

    How imaginative! Good use of the prompts- well done!

    • Mitchell says:

      Thank you Jenny for taking the time on my work, I really appreciate it.

    • Adam says:

      Mitchel I don’t think that people will stop reading your work because you are so imaginative.

  2. Mitchell says:

    Thank you Adam for your kind comments,
    I will try and use some more opener
    P.s my name is Mitchell

  3. Adam says:

    Mitchel this is a great piece of work
    star:great punctuation
    star:i liked when you used your short snapy sentence(bang!!!)
    wish:next time why not try some more openers
    but it was a great piece of work.

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