100 Hundred Word Challenge By Ben

A Frown

A frown a frown,

It looked upside down,

It looped over like a rainbow stretching above town,

It made my head spin round and round,

I hate frowns.

 

A clown a clown,

They stop everyone feeling down,

So don’t have your grin have a meltdown,

Listen to a clown,

I love clowns.

 

Frowns are horrible things to have there glum and icy cold like the freezing Antarctic. Frowns can hurt in all kinds of different ways there isn’t just one type of frown there are hundreds.

Luckily, you can get cheered up by listening or watching something you love.

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  1. Amber says:

    That’s is a really good piece of work
    Here are my two stars and a wish:
    STAR:If rhythms really good.
    STAR:You used the phrase IT LOOKED UPSIDE DOWN.
    WISH:Try and use a ; because I think you can fit on in there somewhere.

  2. Ryleigh says:

    I love the idea of a poem. Can you turn your frown upside down. You could work on using your punctuation.
    Keep writing as you are a very creative writer 🙂 🙂 🙂
    From 🙂
    Ryleigh 🙂
    South 🙂 Australia 🙂

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